sad

[The Real Fatman]

feelin good
but so very sad
so heavy so dark
so lonely and mad

I fiend for love
but only have drugs
hopeless and scared
with no one to share
this burden I bear

the guilt and the pain
they drive me insane

 

[no dogs body]

boo fucking hoo... suffer, asshole...

 

[exoiced]

with no one to share
this burden I bear

Good to see your sharing it here.
Writing helps

 

[(Wordy)]

^ What he said.

I really like your piece. It's short, raw, honest, to the point - cutting right through the bullshit with rhymes...

 

[colicolo]

^ what they said

hopeless and scared
with no one to share

the simple lonliness captured hear strikes really well.

awesome shit dude, awesome