Rouge

[Frosty da snowman]

So dig this chamber
Four walls
A light
3 chairs
A couch
And a court Jester
The details of white on white

A laughing poet with the kings pen
A quill
Thine sword
Feral words
The killing stroke
The florescent starlight of black on black night

A mimicking mime face frozen in crime
The stricken hands
Sherlock surprise face
Shaken knees
Crooked feet
The channeled chaos of blue ocean running through blue river

The papal crowd all amuck
Miss-placed shoe
Screaming child
Mingled scents
The forest of green on rotted green rocks

Witness the man
Standing alone
Breaking the crowd
Softly petrifying
Into martyrs boots

 

[katmeow]

Witness the man
Standing alone
Breaking the crowd
Softly petrifying
Into martyrs boots

Really, really like this one

I noticed you were trying to put an extra space in front of each line... if you put in

<COLOR=white>random text</COLOR> but replace the <> with [] you can get the space.

i.e.
random text white space.

Anyway, love your work

 

[Frosty da snowman]

Re: Re: Rouge

I noticed you were trying to put an extra space in front of each line... if you put in

<COLOR=white>random text</COLOR> but replace the <> with [] you can get the space.

i.e.
random text white space.

Thanx for the tip. IO've been trying to figure out how to do that forever!! I'll have to go back ad edit it when I get a chance. Thanx for the complment to

 

[cherub]

great piece of writting,,

 

[RareForm]

A mimicking mime face frozen in crime
The stricken hands
Sherlock surprise face
Shaken knees
Crooked feet
The channeled chaos of blue ocean running through blue river

amazing. you never disappoint.