Rotting

[Altered_Soul9]

Painfully screaming my name into the night.
Wondering when my eyes will finally view the light.
Tormented by these heartbroken glares.
Wondering why I receive all these hardened stares.
The words are here to bring me down.
They bury my soul beneath the Rotting ground.
Their words slice through all my thoughts.
All of their afflictions seem to cause my faults.
I take their words and put them away.
Away in my heart to release on another Rotting day.
I hate the ones who sing the hypocritical song.
Making every belief you have somehow wrong.
They put me through this neverending strife.
Carelessly throwing away my Rotting life.
Painfully straining some light from the night.
Wondering if the light may be too bright.
Burning blood has been split and its starting to clot.
Finally they get what they wont and my heart starts to Rot.

 

[RareForm]

good stuff, enjoyed this

 

[cherub]

I hate the ones who sing the hypocritical song.
Making every belief you have somehow wrong.
They put me through this neverending strife.
Carelessly throwing away my Rotting life.

love that, the whole thing was great,,, but it so fits people in society today,, judgemental people who forget to look at themselves first.

awesome

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I know alot of ppl dont respond on words, but you two guys are great.

 

[haste]

Nicely written

 

[Altered_Soul9]

bump