roomie bought poetry magnets for the fridge...wrote this while messing around w/ em

[DiamondMaverick]

Bliss

I listen to the soft sound
of her breath,
her scent heavy upon my skin.
I lie quietly, exultant
wishing I could pass an eternity
of seasons with her gentle kisses,
endless hot summer mornings, tongue tracing
her silky form,
warm and intoxicating like sweet wine.

I want time to sleep for awhile,
so I can never cease to live
for her scarlet embrace,
her full lips,
to forever bloom in the light of her eyes.

 

[Pillyo]

Damn girl...

That's very nice...I think you should write more often...seriously. That was incredible!

Pill

 

[on the road]

magnetic poetry rocks!

 

[frostyangel]

got to love kisses

 

[MezZedUp]

Great work!
I remember magnetic poetry with much fondness. However it all ended badly when a friend's parents became concerned about the type of friends he had

I agree, write more

 

[DiamondMaverick]

i wanted to thank you all for your compliments! *beams*

and yes...gotta luv the magnetic poetry. i will try to write more...on the refrigerator as well as away! :D

 

[Jimmy the Gun]

its beautiful