Roll roll roll ...

[Gaz_hmmmm]

Roll roll roll the note, gently into a tube!

Chop the line nice and fine,

insufflate, wait an instant!

Then feel high as a pie!



Meant to be sang like 'Row row row your/the (Which one is it?) boat!'

Took me about 10mins to come up with the insufflate bit and what comes after!

Another thing, I generally come up with my best poetry when I'm falling to sleep, I always tell myself, get out of bed and right this down, cause some of what I've thought of sounds very good at 5am when your very tired but almost a sleep. But I must say, that that stuff tends to be dark and depressing stuff.

 

[shn()z]

Dear Gaz_hmmmm,

We regret to inform you that your recent submission does not meet our current needs. The reasons for this include:

• The market for drug-themed parodies of beloved children's songs is very small and extremely competitive.
• The poem itself appears to have some rhyming problems. In fact, there don't seem to be any rhymes at all.
• It seems to have too many lines/syllables to fit the meter of "Row, Row, Row Your Boat."

Many successful poets have been rejected a number of times before being accepted. We encourage you to continue working on your craft and not to give up hope.

Sincerely,
David Remnick
Editor, The New Yorker

 

[Gaz_hmmmm]

 

[c0wpat]

gaz man... that’s.... beautiful

so powerful, so much meaning, so much emotion, it cut me to the bone dude

 

[pin]

this....this piece of art made me cry deeply....Props....

 

[Raz]

How high is a pie anyway?