Rhythm Divine

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That look in their eyes
Like there's a secret in there
Waiting to get out if
You drill hard enough
With body and mind
If you go deep enough
You can touch their soul
And see God through
The eyes of the deluded
For delusion is God
If God isn't real

Eternal love strikes
In ethereal moments
It's less of a feeling
And more of a frequency
Waiting to be accessed
By the soft touch powerful
By the tender bear hug
Lips dance and meet
Untangling the knot

Here, I lie with you
Alone in your eyes
Alone in your arms
Because nothing else matters
You heart beats a sensual
Rhythm divine
Your warmth radiates
And tangles with mine

 

[Mjäll]

OOOOOOH I FEEL THE RHYTHM DIVINE

/Enrique.

On topic, that's quite a nice poem. I'd like something more bitey from you though!

 

[SwingBreed]

a gentle, weightless rendering of the paradox of a sensuous experience with the intangible.

it's appreciated ^_^

 

[Mehm]

so floaty. you painted a picture of love perfectly. It took me a couple reads but I wouldn't change a thing.

 

[theotherside]

Great read. It would make a kick ass song.

 

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Thanks guys, I appreciate this.