Revenge of soul

[Alterminds]

Emotions
From anywhere
Almost make my spirit
Get out of my body
Win my flesh
Trhu the blood
That appear in th face
Of my skin

I look
Withou realy look
And I desire
That my soul
Burn in my veil

Hate
Inside
Hate
In the eyes
Came from nowwhere
From the hated
Women

 

[LouReed]

you’ve bad rhythm *

fl.uxydul

In and along
complete real soul in levitation,
terror everywhere but never inside
passing the tear of this fantastic foundation of dirt...(bad luck in heaven)

You smiled from above for some reason, only you know
and the present from the depth in a persons breath...
lungs like gentle indicators of trauma

Man or prized god,
Temptress... delicious white skin,

grinning, smoking
jarring, unknowing

Who is the operator of destruction and rebirth,
never to leave where the black points in time
between when I moved it seems,
And when death entered my heart

fool to be formerly

 

[Alterminds]

Why you dont make a trhead for you poem ? Hã? 8(

 

[(Wordy)]

LouReed, you seem to do some weird shit in this forum! I seem to remember you throwing insults at some of the writers here before, and I'm not sure whether you're talking to Alterminds when you say, "you've bad rhythm"? Whatever.

Pretty dark stuff, Alterminds. I really like the opening lines:

Emotions
From anywhere
Almost make my spirit
Get out of my body
Win my flesh
Trhu the blood

'Winning the flesh through the blood' is a powerful image.