Replay

[yakksoho]

Syllable your syphon to me
___kiss each teardrop from my hair
So let each silent fear drop through me
___Unguide the rainbows
Everywhere we're not
You are as windmills tell their
___spheres up there
Whistle for naught lest the
Whisper finds me burning up
___The air.

Unsought deep brown withheld
Regave forgot false pretense
Writes, undo lines wrought
___to me, through me ungrey intense
Replay taught earshots one day
___Circumscribing into night.

One lie lay for pears to drink
Cold October sought remember
I for naught! Ought to unmend your
___Silent distraught into flight.

 

[kazza_baby]

I like this.
Interesting concept.

 

[(Wordy)]

Playfulness, experimental syntax, compound words... unforseen hybrids!

Questions arise: can meaning can be so open that it's closed? Or does the mind need to be opened wider?