Remember to breathe.

[mirabii]

Something about those
deep
anguished
sobs
coming from a broken heart.
Uncontrollable.
Can't help taking all the blame.
But this was not a solo effort.
Times even when it feels
just
like
before
then snapped back to reality with a twist of that tender beaten heart.
Holding on to that hope which has sustained before.
Eternally optimistic, even in the midst of dreams
falling to
pieces
on the floor.
Things won't ever be the same again, and that's for the
best right?
Really, you've got
to believe
to see
that something has changed...
or will change.
It's only when the change comes without invitation..
Holding on to the past.
Curled up with the pillow crying until a
piercing
physical
pain
overtakes the emotional.
Remember to breathe.
All energy spent
lying
still and numb.

 

[C Divinity]

nice work, definitly feel you on this one
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard--DJ Rap
"The integrity of a man's creative work is of greater importance than any charitable endeavor. Those of you who do not understand this are the men destroying the world"

 

[alykitty]

Woah....very well written!!

 

[madmick19]

mez, we all love ya! just remember that
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the consciouness of self is the greatest hinderance to the correct execution of any physical action... u dont exist therefore there are no boundaries or limits

 

[Dont_Call_Me]

nice one mez.
can feel the broken up emotions
i relate well
*hugs*

 

[5FACES]

Don't _ Call_ Me said it perfectly. The way you shaped the poems by having short lines with one word and then longer lines really made the poem effective! Nice work!
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...