refusal of deception

[colicolo]

you made my bed and now i must sleep in it
ransom me to belive this is all my idea
seduced by a traitors' empty promises
my unfocused future of failure is clear

deliberatly cut from the strings of deception
my heart has been roughly torn free
away from your constant eyes of inperfection
it is only now that i have become the true me

strenghted from what i've endured
you've taught me how easy we all fail
i will endevor to be different from you
i will not be blind using dissapointment as brail

so you laugh at my attempt to esacpe from your dark eyes
knowing what evils you have inplanted in me
but i have many haunting ghosts from many other desperate times
surely i know better then to let them become me?



please ignore spelling mistakes, i did!

 

[New]

What I see here is a bolstering piece riveted with self-confidence. Good show!:D

 

[Jabberwocky]

I really enjoyed this col.

"strengthened from what i've endured
you've taught me how easy we all fail
i will endeavor to be different from you
i will not be blind using disappointment as brail"

This part sounds almost like a mantra. I can see the freshly woven tracks as you hasten away from the torment of your capture whether it is yourself or another and those words i quoted seem to be the impetus to do so.


this line confused me though
"away from your constant eyes of inperfection" Are you saying that she is eyeing your imperfections? or that her eyes see imperfectly? or there is a physical imperfection in her eye.