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thujone

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The dusty orange haze reminds me
Of you, as time stood still for the lantern
That cast careful light upon the memorable
Moments smeared across spectrums by time.

A star we shared in the midnight blue,
Tracing landmarks with our fingers
As if we controlled the heavens, sobered
By iridium breathing deep beneath us.

Spooling strong in the dark, hot air
Slung with care by polymer hammocks
Heedless into gravity unbound;
I caught your smile as the steel chariot sang
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thanks, i though the pic happend rather nicely myself :) minus the powerlines and random water spots. ah well, nothing's perfect
 
Awesome :)

One of the few times I read and I don't need to think, yet my eyes move along and take in the words as I'm already relating to each line from memories past.

Brilliant.

Job well done :)
 
thanks :) i've been reading and writing poetry a fair bit lately. i think i'm finally starting to understand the meaning of poetry as expression
 
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