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DarkPoet

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So you walk by me,
maybe we make eye contact but it will be brief, already I see too much,

So you see me,
maybe you have a thought, an impulse, you register the way I look and it sends signals firing into your recognition systems.

I am processed.
You have seen and thought, I am a fading memory to you, to me you are a pulse of life in a dark universe, you have transmitted.



I walk by you,
maybe we make eye contact, I already see too much,

I see into you,
I feel the flow of your thought signals and the blast of your energy field contortions as your aura adjusts to a suitable frequency, accept, defend, avoid, repel.

Processing.
Age, height, dress code, stance, field colour, resistance, tonal variation, frequency, guilt, recent memories, bad smells. The blocks of the universe slide fall into place.



We are two random atoms, crossing paths at high improbability factors, exchanging information on multiple levels, chemical, physical and energetic at least; say hello.



(i added the last line of "processing" after the first post, had to do it, just seemed right;)
 
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i really like the organization, and it's full of information and interesting to follow

the repetition of "I already see too much" caught me
 
Originally posted by DarkPoet
We are two random atoms, crossing paths at high improbability factors, exchanging information on multiple levels, chemical, physical and energetic at least; say hello.


that's wonderful :)
 
Sorry to hijack this, but HOW strange, I had a flashback of tormenting an old friend by muttering "badger badger badger badger badger etc etc" under my breath while we were on the bus LOLZ...

Was at work wen I thought of it, started giggling and couldn't stop!
 
^^ hehe, sry for marginally rotting my own thread but there's not many chances in life where you get to ask that question and I just couldn't resist ;)

thanx all for the positive feedback *muah*.x
 
your a talent to your own words, strangely inviting to read, makes you relook when you pass someone on the street. Excellent!
 
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