rebellion

[living in solitude]

* warning - this is nothing like the great pieces that others in this forum write, so sorry for the disappointment. =/ *
i against i
stop holding me down
set me free
release me from this hell that i've spent the worst years of my life in
I DON'T WANT TO BE HERE ANYMORE
i will fight you until the end
and you will be destroyed
its time i take control
its time i take control
its time i take control
whether you like it or not
i've changed and there's nothing you can do about it
i
will
have
my
peace
of
mind!
-thank-you-k-

 

[Creative_Vibes]

this is a great poem.....the writing that everyone in the world can relate to in everyday life....are the best....
cheer

 

[womanthatrolls]

this is fo sho no dissapointment!

i against i Thats just somthing everyone can relate to, everyone has struggled with where they are and who they are at one point in there lives, i really liked this!

 

[harraser]

Originally posted by living in solitude:
* warning - this is nothing like the great pieces that others in this forum write, so sorry for the disappointment. =/ *
oh shut up.
Dude I really liked this, Ive felt like this so many times, sick of being the person everyone thinks you are and having to act the way they think you should when all you want to be is who you are. great stuff!!