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Bluelighter
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Jul 20, 2001
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North Dakota.
Since we've said goodbye...
Things haven't quite been the same.
Except for me,
There's no one else to really blame.
Since we've said goodbye...
I don't care about much anymore.
It's just...
Things don't seem as great as they surely did before
Since we've said goodbye...
My standards have changed a lot.
Then, I was stupid,
And got myself caught.
Didn't think I'd ever wanna say goodbye.
Realized things had changed a lot.
Didn't think anyone'd love me as much as you.
Realized you probably didn't care for me as much as you made it seem.
Didn't think there'd be anyone who'd compare to you.
Realized that it's not much to actually compare to.
Didn't think I'd love anyone else like I loved you.
Realized I might not have loved you..because I didn't love myself. (still don't)
Didn't think I'd live if I did leave.
Realized it's better this way.
We both thing so..obviously.
 
We both thing....? ( these words in this order threw me. )
I like this piece though. It echos of betrayal in my mind.
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[This message has been edited by Noodle (edited 27 July 2001).]
 
Didn't think there'd be anyone who'd compare to you.
Realized that it's not much to actually compare to.
this, i feel, is really the essence of your piece. and i can relate to it.
nice work.
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E-girl
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"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
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