Ravineux.

[rewiiired]

Desperation grows
to reservation in reversal
a tic away from detonating like an Atomic bomb
there's no time to run, nor hope for calm
as the need strikes with an animal ferocity
that weakens reason
as scales erode

instinct blossoms like readied jaws
eyes steady and sharp as the target's fixed
as she is drawn into his grip,
empowered yet owned,
awakened and spell-bound
as he ravenously has his way, singing,

surrender, beloved nymph
just give in, break out and let go
swell with the life of sweet submission
as I bleed, replete and feed the flow.

 

[New]

Beautiful. The transcendent tones flow well into this piece.

 

[lostNfound]

i like it, i can feel myself having written that, as in i feel the point of you and frame of mind form where you write. to me, it comes through.