Kastr0
Bluelighter
Hi..
Im a rap/hip hop producer..
A lot of critics tell me my music is too violent, I just recently got into making my own songs (I usually make instrumentals/beats for other rappers to purchase) and thought I should make something positive..
I just want some feedback on the lyrics I wrote for my new song..
It is called: Reverse Evolution... The song is about the problems we have in the world, how we are evolving backwards with global warming, poverty, war, pollution, and terrorism..
Please give me some constructive criticism, if you dont like rap music thats fine but please dont give me a lecture about how you dont like it.. everybody has their own taste in music and if you dont like mine no problem.
(Note: The beginning of my first verse sounds a bit violent, but I am speaking directing those lyrics towards rappers that put out a negative vibe so keep that mind please..)
Yall aint casket droppers..
I think its time these wack actor’s start rappin’ proper
I’ll eat emcee’s up like Crab n’ Lobster
Im sicker then AIDS patients eatin’ bad lasagna
Im fast when I blast ratchets on ya
Battle Kastro? I hope you have a partner
Cuz Kastro’s one of the best in the game..
Never the lesser exhange, the weed relieves the stress in my brain
Global warming causing deserts to rain
If we don’t smarten up were destined for pain just let me explain
Our governments keep on provoking war..
Yet people are born with cancer in their vochal cords
And theres no way to stop it - Civilians hit with rockets
Babies dieing people wit no money in their pockets
Nobodies on this topic, so I chose to use it..
We better start respecting the earth before we lose it
Don’t forget Kastro comes after the letter J
I put my hands together and pray that we see a better day
[verse1\]
[verse 2]
Cats get smacked for sayin’ this a dummy song
Only drugs illegal are ones the system cant make money on
“Another bomb went off today in central Baghdad”
That’s all I hear on the news do you really think its not that bad?
In Africa people starve, here food sit on the shelve
I hope we smarten up because were killing ourselves
Everybodies too caught up to see the big picture
And its right in front of us, were stuck in a thick mixture
Earthquakes hit richters, shut downs cause lay-offs
Machine gun spray off, young eyes wide in chaos
Illegal pay offs, corrupt judges bending rules
We could feed villages with the money we spend on jewels
Im not saying were living wrong and should stop our ways
Im saying we should correct ourselves and stop the craze
Cuz da buildings we construct cant stop the waves…
When the ocean levels rise and earth gets its hottest days
Im a rap/hip hop producer..
A lot of critics tell me my music is too violent, I just recently got into making my own songs (I usually make instrumentals/beats for other rappers to purchase) and thought I should make something positive..
I just want some feedback on the lyrics I wrote for my new song..
It is called: Reverse Evolution... The song is about the problems we have in the world, how we are evolving backwards with global warming, poverty, war, pollution, and terrorism..
Please give me some constructive criticism, if you dont like rap music thats fine but please dont give me a lecture about how you dont like it.. everybody has their own taste in music and if you dont like mine no problem.
(Note: The beginning of my first verse sounds a bit violent, but I am speaking directing those lyrics towards rappers that put out a negative vibe so keep that mind please..)
Yall aint casket droppers..
I think its time these wack actor’s start rappin’ proper
I’ll eat emcee’s up like Crab n’ Lobster
Im sicker then AIDS patients eatin’ bad lasagna
Im fast when I blast ratchets on ya
Battle Kastro? I hope you have a partner
Cuz Kastro’s one of the best in the game..
Never the lesser exhange, the weed relieves the stress in my brain
Global warming causing deserts to rain
If we don’t smarten up were destined for pain just let me explain
Our governments keep on provoking war..
Yet people are born with cancer in their vochal cords
And theres no way to stop it - Civilians hit with rockets
Babies dieing people wit no money in their pockets
Nobodies on this topic, so I chose to use it..
We better start respecting the earth before we lose it
Don’t forget Kastro comes after the letter J
I put my hands together and pray that we see a better day
[verse1\]
[verse 2]
Cats get smacked for sayin’ this a dummy song
Only drugs illegal are ones the system cant make money on
“Another bomb went off today in central Baghdad”
That’s all I hear on the news do you really think its not that bad?
In Africa people starve, here food sit on the shelve
I hope we smarten up because were killing ourselves
Everybodies too caught up to see the big picture
And its right in front of us, were stuck in a thick mixture
Earthquakes hit richters, shut downs cause lay-offs
Machine gun spray off, young eyes wide in chaos
Illegal pay offs, corrupt judges bending rules
We could feed villages with the money we spend on jewels
Im not saying were living wrong and should stop our ways
Im saying we should correct ourselves and stop the craze
Cuz da buildings we construct cant stop the waves…
When the ocean levels rise and earth gets its hottest days
