Ramble, Ramble, Ramble

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

The same song through different ears,
switch off the radio,
too painful to bear.

Walking around, with no set place to go,
losing direction, revelling
in being lost.

Catch up with friends, laugh and smile,
at the correct prompts.
Why can't they see?

Turn to substance abuse, which, in turn
abuses me, thoroughly,
cling to my addictions.

It all goes away, the pain, the sorrow.
The happiness as well.
I am a husk.

 

[cherub]

I love the way you put this.
good job

 

[Rollingrrl]

I'll echo Cherub's wise words, the way you put it all down, the feelings into the words and twist the words so that each is in just the right place to cultivate the right feelings and responses in your readers, although I bet you wrote it strictly for yourself and that's why its good!

~Shelly~

 

[jeebus13]

I hate the way you put this, but only because I wish I'd thought of it first. Jealousy's a bitch.

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Thanks, I'm glad my rambling is appreciated