Rain

[vurtomatic]

It's been raining.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

I love the whimsical way you've presented this - it really brings back the innocent childhood fascination and preoccupation with rain from many years ago.
This was great.

 

[vurtomatic]

Thanks, I was trying for that! Used to have a lot of fun playing in the rain

Couldn't resist, here's the final--before it starts looking as random as its namesake--edit.

 

[(Wordy)]

This is cute like a kitten, vurt... very e.e. cummings.

 

[spgeddi]

coolio

 

[IXinX]

Hee hee i like it where are my gumboots?

 

[New]

I absolutely hate rain, so my skin started to crawl when I read this. I like it because it was able to remind me of my hatred and phobia.

 

[Ghost_of_Caress]

I really liked this. It's much more positive & fun than the words I used to post as Caress. I just never could write about puppies & sunshine...it's not in me. However, your piece above lifted my spirits today. Very nice.

 

[vurtomatic]

Thanks guys, I really had fun with this. Ghost, yeah I get where you're coming from, this is one of those impromptu rarities Stu, nothing you haven't seen before New, you hate rain?

 

[Raz]

This is cute like a kitten, vurt...

Yes, definitely! I like! :D

 

[psycosynthesis]

This is good! Very good! I love the way you play with the position of words on the page, using the page as a canvas for a poetic portrait. Very Cummings indeed.

 

[echo off]

slishloshhhgurglechuckleshhhh is perhaps the coolest word i have ever seen created

i don't know if it was intended, but during

rain;
on my t@ngue
in my m(o)uth AH
in my ey*s!

i see the rain itself jumping onto the page to blur the letters, and i like it