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rain dance

BloSs0m

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Copenhagen, Denmark
My eye lashes fell out with a tearing sound
my heart broke in two.
silently.
Becasue of you.

i would never have known if your pain hadn't killed me.
...the pain of being alone...

i watched.
you lay there. every limb shaking. trembling.
a vortex of pain.
what happenned to the melody?

you got lost again.
...the pain of being alone...

blood spurted from your nostils.
stained your lips and ran down ur chin.
with every second's passing.
the darkness, closed in.

you wearent meant for this time.
...the pain of being alone...

each breath i take shatters my dreams.
my heart. plunged into freezing water.
knives pierce my skin.
im lost in your sin.

you gagged on our troubles.
...the pain of being alone...

Why did you have to leave.
to go and dance in the rain.
you left this world of sadness.
but only added to its pain.

your pain gone. its now my pain.
...the pain of being alone...

born by moonlight. fed by the sun.
where had all this begun.
one day.
ill come dance in the rain with you.

its aching in my lounge room.
...the pain of being alone...

im dehydrating. each tear is excruciating.
slicing my face. staining my lips.
my hands tremble like they're fighting to fly
the sky is crying. and only i know why.

you couldnt face it.
...the pain of being alone...

it deafens my heart now.
now that ur gone now.
the pain.
of being alone.



ok. old piece. fixed up. critique?
Ta!
 
Ah Bl0ss0m. Your words never cease to amaze me in any form. Your such an expressive soul. I love the way you describe your feelings with so much painful passion. It's honestly a beautiful piece of writting. I also agree with U-A-N that this spoken aloud sounds achingly heartbreaking but grand all the same.

*Hugs*

shals...

This is what I love about you...
 
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