Rage

[wesmdow]

Rage~

It is not a lone drop of rain,
But rather the entire flood.
All encompassing, rushing
Over every surface, soaking it—
Drowning it.


It is not a solitary beast—
But rather a stampede,
A torrent of emotion, charging blindly
Ahead across the plains—
Smashing the grass down flat.


Rage is not a single bee,
But rather a swarm.
Irrational and angry, indiscriminately
Attacking anyone who crosses it—
Stinging them with venom.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I like the way you show rage as a force of nature, making it feel very powerful.

Thumbs up!

 

[(Wordy)]

Agreed.

This is a perfect example of expressing a concept poetically. Very impressive.

 

[wesmdow]

wow, thanks! the positive responses mean a lot.

 

[up all night]

I agree with what DS and wordy said. Nice work.