rabid desire

[smurf976]

rough, gentle
i feel your hands
coursing over the bare flesh
of my eviscerated memory
all breathing channels invaded by
the staunch perfume
of your sultry manhood
that explodes
in an effervescent stream
of passion and lust and fire
and what some call love
besieged by the craving that surges
through every ounce of my being
crying out from the very depths of my fecundity
wild beasts claw at the emptiness
yearning for the rapture
aching for the fervid sensation of flesh on flesh
one touch
just one touch
to sate my hunger
but you are not here
and you will not come
not now
not ever
and the realization pulsates in every cell
of my depraved bady

 

[C Divinity]

wow...nice work--i really liked this
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard--DJ Rap
"A man can tell a thousand lies, i've learned my lesson well"
"I'm not here to be served, but to serve"

 

[yakksoho]

This was fantasitc and very passionate.

 

[Haza]

very good, i think you pin pointed the perfect words for this, the whole thing was very sensual...i liked it alot
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TV says donuts are high in fat, kazoo, found a hobo in my room, its princess leia, the yodel of life, give me my sweater back or ill play the guitar!
AIM: munkyrice

 

[alykitty]

aching for the fervid sensation of flesh on flesh
one touch
just one touch
to sate my hunger
but you are not here
and you will not come
not now

I am so feeling you on this....
Excellent work...

 

[barefoot raver]

oh my. this reminds me so much of a poem i wrote, "everyboy." maybe i'll post it here. it's nice to know other people have thought the same things you have in different ways.