Queen of Night

[empty_remains]

She cries for us
The ones who can not
And those that never learned
Her sorrow great for all our pent in pain
Beauty in darkness and she is the queen

She held my hand to release me
As her tears filled the night
All of my sorrow eased
Flowing to the earth
With the help of my queen


*Okay give it to me straight, does this suck as much as I think it does?*

 

[allthewayin]

Ya, it totally blows.








Hahaha Just Kidding, I like it and think it's great. But I must ask, who is she?

 

[empty_remains]

She is someone thats been in my dreams lately. i just have this image and she feels so powerful i've woken up before expecting her to be there.
so i guess she's just an someone i created. sorry it's nothing deeper.

 

[allthewayin]

No, I'd say that's very fitting.