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spinkle

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push hard

i do my dreaming while awake
push hard and i don't break

well babe i brought it before you
but you don't have to look
this is the conclusion
forgot the dose you took

that's why you stare in surprise
do your dreaming while awake
come in the confusion
push hard but i don't break

don't care how just stand for me now
we're walking to the door
i'm out of everything
but you need one dose more

maybe you're guilty for a reason
don't make me why you stay
sure it's safe to promise
that i'll see you shift away

push hard and i don't break
i do my dreaming while awake

well babe i brought it before you
but you don't have to look
this is the confusion
forgot the dose you took

well babe i brought it before you
i do my dreaming while awake

don't care how just stand for me now
can you make it to the door
and i know i'm out of everything
you're sure there's one dose more

well babe i brought it before you
push hard and i don't break
well babe i brought it before you
there's no abuse that i won't take

but you don't have to look
forgot the dose I took
well babe i brought it before you
i do my dreaming while awake
well babe i brought it before you
push hard and i don't break

don't care how just stand for me now
else what was all this for
and i know i'm out of everything
but there's always one dose more

i do my dreaming while awake
push hard and i don't break
there's no abuse that i won't take
i do my dreaming while awake

don't care how just stand for me now
when did we reach the door
and i know i'm out of everything
but you'll find one dose more

there's always one dose more
push hard and i don't break

don't care how just stand for me now
else what was all this for
and i know i'm out of everything
but there's always one dose more

don't care how just stand for me now
when did we reach the door
and i know i'm out of everything
but you'll find one dose more

there's always one dose more
i do my dreaming while awake
push hard and i don't break

spinkle 2005
 
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Just listened to the track... it feels to me like the music is too fast for the lyrics... it seems like it's a rush to get all the words in and if I didn't have the lyrics in front of me, there would be sections I wouldn't have understood. I don't think it's your best work, but it's not bad :)
 
Spinkle is endowed with pure natural creativity and ability in his words and songs.

Reading the song, is much different then hearing him though.

Spinkle's voice even turns me on! :P


Whatever it is you do, that makes you wake up and suddenly write and perform a new song out of the blue.
Keep it up.
 
well thank you, syn. =) comments like this definitely reinspire me, so i appreciate it. just keep your hands off my thighs from now on ;)
 
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