Pure Love

[BrightEyesIsMe]

The feel of actual piece flows through my veins tonight
My eyes bright and clear
My feet lifted off of the floor
My garment of white tonight like a floating cloud
My hands reached out for you
The moon so bright that our skin looks almost blue
You take my hand and we sit on the old rock
The place we met
The place we came to know each other
The place we fell in love
The lake before us reflecting the sky
The cool wind blows leaves around our feet
You put your arms around me and look me in my eyes
You cuddle your face into my neck and tell me you love me
I wish you knew how you make me feel
I love you too
You kiss me on my cheek
It is the most beautiful feeling in the world
Just the most simple touch from you sends me flying
So I have not touched the ground lately
I wish I could just stay in your arms forever
A place of sweet serenity
My precious love
The sun soon to rise
We must go
To where it does not matter
Because we still be together
Weather it be in mind or spirit
I will always be there
And I know you will be there
All I have to do is close my eyes and I hear your voice
Goodnight darling

 

[Dekloren]

 

[cherub]

Girl this piece is so touching, it flows to smooth and it just makes me feel all warm and cozy through the whole piece, excellent work !

 

[jaymie]

^^ Yes. It makes me go, "awww" in the warm, fuzzy, gooey feel of love. Very well said!

 

[RareForm]

You made me smile today....this was such a beautiful piece...you're writing always excites me before i read it..and this certainly did not disappoint :D