Punish me

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Punish me
I deserve it.
Earned it.

Here I am
My whole self laid bare now, for you to scrutinise

No more lies.

There's shaddows in corners you never knew
I'm sorry it's true.

The light still dances in others,
but I will throw a blanket over those

for now I suppose.

I can't bear how my choices have hurt you
How images now haunt you, from the things you have discovered

How does one seperate and highlight

The better parts from the ugly ones

I might...

Try to hide

But now you see....

I just hope one day you can

Still love me.

 

[Psychedelics_r_best]

Are you sure you want me to punish you. My punishment is really harsh.

 

[RareForm]

There's shaddows in corners you never knew
I'm sorry it's true.

The light still dances in others,
but I will throw a blanket over those

for now I suppose.

I felt this. hope to see more of you, maybe a little brighter though

 

[Pantomime7]

I feel these words. Very Nice.

 

[neurotoxic]

mmmmmmm

sexie

*Gets his whip*

 

[cherub]

Very much a piece from the heart,,, well carried out ,, i feel you!!!!!!!! * hugs*

 

[BullitNutz]

mmmmmmm

sexie

*Gets his whip*

You are such a prevert %)

 

[Adrenochrome]

I liked ur poem,
Just curious is this anything to do with BD/SM? seriously

 

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

^ LOL... no. But I can see how it could be construed that way! :D So much similarity between play subservience and real self-hate.... at least on the surface

 

[neverwas]

*hearts*

 

[Samadhi]

*hugs* hope things are looking up chica. You have a wonderfully evocative way with words.

 

[xtcxtc]

I just hope one day you can

Still love me.

all of it excellent ! %)

 

[Scrooge'sOldLady19]