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doofqueen

doofqueen

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I see in his eyes
what i now see
in the mirror.

He lives in my world
He looks through the same windows
Or did he make my world his?

I live in a castle
where princess' are real
and pink clouds float in the sky.

:)
 
old poem, new thoughts?

funny - replace the 'he' with 'she' these days and i'm feeling that all over again. More real then the first time even :)
 
I see in his eyes
what i now see
in the mirror.

He lives in my world
He looks through the same windows
Or did he make my world his?
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I think these lines are great. I don't go for the whole 'fairytale' thing as a general rule, but I guess that's just a matter of personal taste.

So are you writing new stuff these days?

funny - replace the 'he' with 'she' these days and i'm feeling that all over again. More real then the first time even
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Maybe you could build upon this poem by drawing inspiration from what has transpired since you wrote it? :)
 
i havn't written anything new for ages (hence me bumping my old ones for more feedback :p) hehe the word just seem lost to be at the moment. Maybe i should just sit and write and see what comes out :)
 
doofqueen said:
i havn't written anything new for ages (hence me bumping my old ones for more feedback :p) hehe the word just seem lost to be at the moment. Maybe i should just sit and write and see what comes out :)
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You seemed to have the passion and the ideas last time I met you, shouldn't have a problem writing as far as i'm concerned :p

and keep bumping your old poems, I enjoy reading them
 
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