Pounding the Table in an Empty Room.

[Wiretrippa]

Untether me goddamn it,

release me from your sway.

I'm locked in this goddamn it,

can't throw the pain away.



You left me here goddamn it,

I'm cold and it's real late.

You walked away goddamn it,

my feelings just don't rate.



You won't pick up goddamn it,

I've got the words picked out.

You won't speak up goddamn it,

can't hear what you're about.



I miss you so, goddamn it,

the anger fades to pain.

I'm hurting so, goddamn it,

there's razors in the rain.

 

[RareForm]

I liked this one alot...it flowed quite nicely, I would like to hear more from you...

You have talent.

 

[froggygirl]

I'm hurting so, goddamn it,

there's razors in the rain.

I like that line a lot