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Post your rhymes, free-form poems, ANYTHING! :)

Lol I didn't delete your thread. They could've easily just deleted my posts. And you still haven't gotten back to me on my Golden Girl's rap which is gonna hit the charts as soon as I can find a producer. I think it could be a good conscious rap you know about how guys like older women and that there's nothing wrong with that.
 
Yo, you Eminem incarnate fo realz. Wut happen to yo battle rap thread tho dawg? You was spittin crack.

Some nutsack troll ruined it for all of us who enjoyed it.

Lol I didn't delete your thread. They could've easily just deleted my posts. And you still haven't gotten back to me on my Golden Girl's rap which is gonna hit the charts as soon as I can find a producer. I think it could be a good conscious rap you know about how guys like older women and that there's nothing wrong with that.


^ if you weren't a fucking scumbag there would have been no reason for deleting any posts never mind getting rid of the whole thread.
 
They ask me aiyy M...
-[Why don't you smile no more...? Why don't you smile no more?]


Look around, all I see is cold streets, finish school, get a good job, otherwise just stressed, laugh when they say they depressed, god bless, I understand what it is to be a mess.


In these troubled times, it's hard to find a better rhyme, all you need is.time they say, but life passes by so fast, like everyday, listen to the words I say, without focus, this is hopeless.


They say mo' money, mo' problems, well with no cash, life is wack, kids on these streets Jacking, while parishers preach peace, motherfuckers rob you and hate always manipulate to get theirs but I dont fucking care,


Turned 25. Asked God what does it mean to be alive? Iys it everyday that I have to stress, what the fuck are these people saying, always be content 5 steps forward, multiples back, dropped out mentally, but physically I play the role, but this college system isn't about to give me a bank roll.


["what are your plans? Are you looking into jobs?"] nah bitches, I'm ready to rob, cuz fuck these fobs and these nickel and dime, types saving up in this nine to five hell, pretending it's all well, it isn't for me that shit bores me. I don't know, maybe I'm.just fucked, maybe I won't have luck, but whether its rapping, capping, selling, raining or hailing, fuck this debating and waiting, spent years fading, but I've always been contemplating, and creating sicker scenes in silver screens, than opposing jokers could ever dream, my life from birth to now was hard work, and I'm sick of the circle jerk, I put in work, and go in and serve, trust me you gonna love me, thats my word.


-When I was younger, they said I was so mature, I take thoughts as serious as the word, now I'm a child searching for his gold, motherfuckers send viruses to get rid of me, like a common cold but at 26, I'm really not that old, you win,.you lose life or death you choose, on this level, you must kik doors open, never let em see you down, aim higher for their crowns, I'm multi dimensional, that means I'm highly mentionable, and those that ain't never had soul, wanna leave you out in the bitter cold, like they had it sold, but they never see me fold, cuz I'm carving out my space of gold.


Fuck raps and gats, this is a multiple play act, thats why I need multiple stacks, so I can lay back, and haters wanna take that, but they can only fake at. 2013 the year, and I'm outta here.

-Rhymes I wrote last summer.
 
Spiritual soulless vulture ever Lyrical reciting thunderous volts composed of Lethal scorchers in October, Defining Infamous exposure of the Mindless soldier that spits Articulate Writings like Sick poachers, Magnificent Torture as I ignite MICs colder than Convicts infected with sulfur Knifing punctures, Bloody collages demolished demonic by Toxic Deposits of RAW Clips, Techs Infectious undetected by enemies I intercept wit Relentless melodies, Verbal katanas demented ambidextrous, Abstract insane Nirvana extended deranged vengeance as I fucking Blast you defenseless obsolete like fucking Tetris inventions. High tension Krystalized deliverance as I Smoke cigarettes belligerent like Viper engines, Carnivorous intensive as Piranha disfigurements tearing out ligaments. Interacted Hyperactive Blacksmith contrasted Psychoactive practiced in caskets, I blast shit like black acid forever captive Intergalactic havoc I blow brains erratic physically backflip skull stranded as I attacked it, Primitive marksman the scope I sharpen for unlimited Cardiac darkness,
 
^ nice.. where'd you get all your vocab?
That's a lot of words that have ryming compound syllables.

The flow reminds me of Benefit. You ever heard the song "so sick" by him? That kinda remind me of it.. there's another song by him like that too but can't remember it's name ATM.

On another note.. anyone wanna continue that 8 bar thing we were doing? If so throw em down, I'll follow.
 
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Thanks man, I don't know really. Alwaysbeen articulate you could say. Stayed in school well HS anyway haha. Been rapping for about 5-6 years now, my only hobby aside from drugs sadly.

I don't believe in using words I can't spell or define as a lot of rappers do nowadays but yeah I take it pretty serious.

Plus, when I'm spun I sit and write for 8-9 hours straight without moving. Its ridiculous LOL I never do anything else And I get stuck in an Infinite loop of lyrics the entire time. I wrote that one last night when tweaked in about 15mins haha. I'm down though, wanna start?
 
Yeah if you wanna. I'm on my phone right now cuz my computer is charging. But I'll do 8 bars real quick.. it's not a battle though. I'll write em up now.. I hope I can count bars on my phone lol.
 
I'm in a different kinda head space, sorta like a head case,
I'm crazy to the point Im in a rare space, tryna drown myself in a lead case filled with bear mase,
Head straight down to the base-ment,
Just in case I say shit, that'll fuck the plenet up like I plenned it and laced it,
I'll be underground already dead before everyone, ahead of them already in first place so face lets it,
I'm a unnatural disaster, the worlds unfashionable bastard,
How many bars am I at, I can't count on my phones screen,
But as long as I'm at bat, don't root for the home team,
Cuz where ever I go i'm just visiting, my home doesn't exist anymore,
With that fact I try living, tryna figure out what's on the other side of the door.


Was that 8 lol? I'll see when I post.
 
Let's Take A Ride As I Spontaneously Combust, Only Black Mist I Trust As I Attract Heart Attacks More Explicit Than Katana Uppercuts, Devilish Visits Of The Venomous Mystic Till They Snatch My Life Digits Sadistic Without Resistance__Every Dose I Approach The Unholy Ghost In Focused Psychosis, The Moment Lives Ferocious Forever Hopeless As I Stroll Through Hell Unnoticed Burning My Flesh Like Molten, Vulcanized and Soulless With Open Eyes Towards My Opponent As I Close Em Down Euthanized By Dope Shards So Potent__Eternal Annihilates Like The Virus Dilated Iris Timeless While I Drain Bloodbanks Of 5-0 Sirens Fulla Crank Torturing Lives Death Defying Like Ancient Myans
 
BTW^^^ I mainly write my lyrics in that format cause I've had countless kids tell me I "steal" my rhymes from popular rappers LOL

Not that it proves much but I got annoyed so its like a trademark thing I do. Takes more time I guess? Lol whatever I keep it original I don't front.
 
^ what format you use to write your rhymes is your choice, i only do it the way I do to make it easier for others to read and hopefully catch the rhythm im going for.
everyones style is different.
and the thing about people saying others "steal" rhymes from people. They gotta realize that rhyming is more catchy and easier to remember than someone just speaking.. you can listen to a song 8 years ago and know the words to it then but then never have listened to it again but for some reason remember a rhyme that was said not realizing you've heard it somewhere else 8 years before (or at least part of it, or got the idea of a rhyme from it).
What im trying to say is that music is VERY influential whether people admit it or not, they are influenced by it also especially if they ever attempt to make that kind of music themselves.
 
I definitely agree, I don't know its really whatever to me as long as I know its legitimate I can really careless what anyone thinks. I guess cause my wordplay is very extensive, people think I steal shit I guess. I mean I consider a good rapper & I know at times I do tend to get pretty complex but to me? I don't think my words are that crazy or whatever. At times yeah but I think its mainly due to my style of writing bars, I like to get Multisyllabic and I think.its just the structure of how I write.

When my rhymes are all over the place subject wise and have a dark vibe like that one^ it typically means I'm Spun Lol it's funny how I'll get complimented on the street on how dope I am but in reality? I can't freestyle for jack shit! LOL never been a strong point of mine, I can do Ok occasionally but just never could roll em off like some can. It doesn't bother me though, cause if someone wants to compare verses line for line? Its done! haha that's why all my friends always wanna battle but never wanna do a track with me LOL


Hiphops a big part of my life, I can say it's safed me in a way from going overboard with drugs at times. I mean I still do drugs.and write sober or intoxicated but something about writing I just love with a passion. I post tracks on my Soundcloud every now and then but I write lyrics everyday for at least 2-3 hours easy. Just relieves so much stress and anger for me & like I said before its practically the only real hobbyI have outside of doing drugs. Shit it.keeps me SANE when I do unfortunately have to be sober haha.
 
Unfocused rhymes.
Like a tiger, I emerge in the wilderness, no taste of bitterness,
Wild eyed and mezmorized,
Just trying to get some hides..

I began innocent, like an unlit cigarette, since then I got hooked like nicorette
The system of systems, that builds prisons instead of wisdom,
Everything becomes undone,
Give praise to the number one, MC.!!

Seems to be the only fucking priori-T
In this society of lying,
Wack shyt buying, false hood signed,

Where nothingness is a test -
But there's nothing, just stress,

When I test the upper limits, of this twisted, sick and most gifted,
motherfuckers get lifted, and their old tales get thrifted,

I'm about to go off on some tangentials, but my point is it all starts in the mentals,
keep it lean like lentils, stay green like Oscar,

I should be in the academy, instead of speaking blasphemy on the microphone, to the monotone industry,
Thriving off misery,
Federal Agencies giving Golden Handshakes to executives that Send out transitive signals from down south to the bitter cold,
North, stay focused on your net Worth
Untap me, unsynch me,
Cuz you motherfuckers could never lynch me.

You can turn me up, and turn me down, look around as if you ever found, a sicker and iller, more bitter, heavy hitter than the M#N#C
Cage me in like a fkn tiger G, pacing back and forth behind the system like they were bars, fuck if anyone want to see you living large, I'd rather be broke and be free, so I can roam the streets. Because the knowledge I possess should come with a fucking fee.
 
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If you think closing down my shit will put a fucking end,
To the beef I won't squash till it's fucking said,
That someone backed out, snitched and shut down my thread,
Ain't no infractions now homie, no name's have been said,
And they won't be, guess im in this game by my lonely,
If someone thinks than can out rap me than show me,
This ain't a battle, this ain't even a diss, this is me venting just from being pissed,
Off, turn your head and cough, got you by the balls, now i rip em off,
That was only 8 bars, written in 2 to 3 minutes,
Imagine how hard it could be, if i got the chance to finish..
 
There's truth to these words said, thoughts been clearing in a blurred head,
Bring new life to the blood shed, end world wars now 'for the worlds dead,
I see what's happening let the word spread, like a disease through a germ spread,
Sent this message in encryption, de-crypt it now by description,
It's a world wonder like pyramids by Egyptians, read their hieroglyphic premonition inscriptions,
The impression that im giving, is making you rethink history by reliving,
Relieving the tension that you're grieving, by the past forgot that you're deceiving,
There's no more sense in convincing, im the realist idealist prophecy psychotic psychic that is breathing.


Yes, im quoting myself.. pay attention to the words i said and look at the time stamp and date when i posted it on 3/30/14.
Then look at the news of something that happened just yesterday 4/2/14 regarding something that shares my name..

-HOOD

Anyone wanna question me about how i do it the way i do it?
Read the last line quoted.

I scare myself sometimes.

EDIT: I just saw it on ABC World News Now like an hour ago.

http://abcnews.go.com/US/fort-hood-shooting-alleged-gunman-identified-spc-ivan/story?id=23168151
 
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Anyone wanna question me about how i do it the way i do it?

What is it you think you do? Your link makes no sense. My good sir you are caught within your own fantasy. Quit scaring yourself.
 
Quit scaring yourself.
OK thank you.

What i "think" i can do is make something that people can relate to whatever they would like it to apply to.
That was an example, if you can't find the connection between the words i said and what happened. Then you don't understand what I meant in the post.
It is about history repeating itself, people forgetting about the past and having to relive it. Deceiving it by forgetting it in the first place. New blood shed to end blood shed. A mystery, and grieving which should have been prevented in the first place.
I can "see" what is happening in a sense of there is something spreading (like a germ spread) through the world, causing all the fucked up shit that is going on.. this world is going to shit.
It's a cold world, it's only gonna get colder too.

It could relate to many things in history that WILL repeat themselves by people who don't learn from the past.
 
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top the crop with a sloppy
pop when you cop to the floppy
shop till you swap with the copy
kick stop the drop in a jalopy
with its everflowing and glowing throwing
easygoing unknowing nature
and forgoing nomenclature
 
If i had a dollar for every time someone doubted me or underestimated me, i would be rich.
If i had a dollar for every time i proved someone wrong whether i was right or not, i would be richer.
If i took the millions of dollars i would have earned from that and someone finally believed in me and thought i was right and made a bet with it..
I would be wrong and end up right back to where i am at now.
Broke.
Here i am.

Not a poem but just something i thought of.
 
Ok so can I write verses without getting deleted now?

Is it we can't "directly" diss someone but we can write verses from a general standpoint I guess?
 
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