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To A Girl

To a girl who is so far away,
Yet who's beauty is almost tangible.
To a girl who is eternally strong,
Yet has the softest of touch.
To a girl who is a leader,
with such strong passion,
and who spreads that passion to many others including I.
To a girl who has such beautiful eyes,
oh so tempting to get lost gazing into.
To the girl whom I would embrace for ever.

To the girl whom I love
I still carry your heart

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What do y'all think?
 
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caseface99 said:
^^ I think whoever inspired that would love to read it.
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Thank you! It is actually inspired by my ex girlfriend who I still love very much :\ We separated only because we live on opposite sides of the country and are at different points in our lives, but I'm hoping she will appreciate reading this little message on valentines day. She actually just left for Australia today for 6 months as well. Ahh I tear up like a baby every time I read it to myslelf. :|
 
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desertracer543 said:
Thank you! It is actually inspired by my ex girlfriend who I still love very much :\ We separated only because we live on opposite sides of the country and are at different points in our lives, but I'm hoping she will appreciate reading this little message on valentines day. She actually just left for Australia today for 6 months as well. Ahh I tear up like a baby every time I read it to myslelf. :|
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I'd be touched assuming I was a girl.
 
desertracer543 said:
Thank you! It is actually inspired by my ex girlfriend who I still love very much :\ We separated only because we live on opposite sides of the country and are at different points in our lives, but I'm hoping she will appreciate reading this little message on valentines day. She actually just left for Australia today for 6 months as well. Ahh I tear up like a baby every time I read it to myslelf. :|
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Nice man I can relate. Long distance is tough :(
 
Through The Foggy Window Panes of My Endless Pain, The Shotty Flames Dwindle Towards Becoming Insane, The Vital Symbol Of Mental Rain Burns Like Tribals Of Indo Inside My Brain Yelling No Survival, How Long Will They Mourn? My Life Can No Longer Prolong The Final Song That Awaits, 8 Years Of Getting High Altering My Fate__

Letting It Ride Monitoring My Attempt To Escape This Infamy, Continue Till Theirs Nothing Left Up Within Me To Record Another Symphony, My Body Has Finally Begun The Signs Of Thee Meltdown, Cryin What Will It Be? My Heart Takes A Step Down, Family Only Left In Astound At My Last Breath That Was Never To Be Found__The Narcotic Scriptures Fought It Remain Methodic As I Drift Off Outta Existence, So Many Close Friends Who Have All Witnessed The Downfall Separated With Distance___Ive Contemplated The Loss As The Drugs Facilitated My Body To Drop Like A Shotty Shot But Now It Becomes Irrelevant, Options Transparent As My Own Arrogance Dethroned My Past Relationships & With My Parents__

Mentally I wish I could Advance & overcome my addiction but apparently I'm stuck in a trance reciting RedRum as my heart absorbs the Sickness___My Hearts about to be attacked, vital organs collapsed runnin through as my oxygen begins to extract, Shadowbox Within, I can't express the remorse within as I look back on the wasted years I spent Freebasin, without fear____Body Chemistry Rotting Away So Menacing, As My Heart Stops Flowing In Penalties Of A Long Rivaled Enemy, From Heavy Use Of Stims To Every Opiate Crushed Into Sin, Diminishes My Insides To Volcanic Dust Nd Brim
 
supersonic isotonic muscle spasm brain waves on it
quiver-ing with no intent
he brought you to orgasmic end

once upon a time you said
no man could match this game in bed
it was the best you could imagine
euphoric heat waves from a dragon

that time has passed and things have changed
the memories cause so much pain
left and went for education
my time with you was love-propagation

before you left, just one more time
I brought that ecstasy of mine
we played that game you loved so much
curling toes, with my touch

Pleasure bomb, the fuse was lit
I-could-not-believe-this-shit
After you had said “the end”
we still made love and made souls blend

You agreed “this can’t be over”
maybe we should take things slower
then you left, returned to school
its different now, was I a fool?

You haven’t spoken to me since
whats up with your am-biv-a-lence?
somethings changed since last we spoke
please don’t treat me like a joke

the side effects of love connection
happen most with lost reflection
I wish you were still in my life
I can see you as my wife

I see you dancing in that skirt
the image really makes me hurt
I wish we had just one more day
what-could-make-this-pain-go-away

in all the world, just one thing
pick up the phone, give me a ring
explain to me that you were wrong
that you still loved me, all along
 
The inner workings of my mind can best be in this way described:

Bad choices get high
nod out no pride
hurt people tell lies
gazing at the skies
tears flowing from eyes

not a cat but 9 lives
everyone of us dies
finished with this phony guise
screwed up what i can’t devise
shown myself with no disguise
no longer stuck in my demise

i must admit i’ve gotten wise
maybe self esteem will rise
life is always a surprise
but i’ve been taught not to surmise
so for my effort whats my prize?
A heaping pile o’ SHIT & FLIES.
 
Love your last couple case bro.


"The young lonely man on the corner wishes for better days

All he's givin are not wishes but he's living them anyway

Feels like he could get away, as the energy builds up it starts to detonate

Has he met fate? He's not gone but hesitates as the fear then resonates

Watch him press play, and see the story that's told

Is so messed in his brain, he feels no story could hold

A true picture of all the torment, that resorts in his core

He's stuck in the past, like it ain't over, it won't ever change but if he aint sober

Keeping his eye on the prize, but he can't focus

He blames those who have ever done wrong by him

Cuts all contact and holds a grudge then leaves

No confrontation in the movements He makes

Not even music is his outlet for calling out fakes

One day he knows the drugs are gonna go

Until then he wonders, how longs this gonna go? "
 
She'll sit you down and shut you up
Grab you by the waist and pull you down
If you try to resist, she'll laugh at you
Close your eyes and see her dancing
The lady in the blue skirt


Dancing in the sand
She takes you by the hand
Her touch leaves you in tears
While you try to pull away
You double over in laughter
The lady in the blue skirt


Binging with a lack of ethics
Hunched over and pathetic
Reach out to the blinking light
And climb down from the rainwave
As the frequencies tackle you
from below
The lady in the blue skirt


Rays of light strike down the darkness
You feel enlightened yet confused
The trees grow gleen, as you watch them sway
Stumbling around in a stupor
Asking yourself a humbling question;
"What if her spirit was truly real?"
Lost for words you sit back down,
and think of Lady Salvia
 
Got a white girl and another swarm, yeah,
I know I really shouldn't care but I do, yeah,
Couldn't even make up my mind where to go when it all fizzles out,
Extend the boundaries, flounder in the outcome. That was just nature, but fuck it, she was possessed in my retroactive sight-of-nothing reflex.
 
I'm sick to fucking death of this same old shit
A repetitive fucking cycle wishing it end quick
Getting myself into a rage writing this up while I'm venting
I shouldn't allow myself to get this way but I can't pretend things
Are fine when there not when I'm not high I'm edgy
I fucking burnt myself, I played with fire and got burnt hard
The fucked thing is I will never ever learn, nope
Not even really concerned for my mental health, it fades away
I'm stuck in a maze dazed out wild my brain displays hate
Constantly in a battle to maintain a sane face
Sick to death of it all, some days are okay and some I wish that I'd never been born
It's funny how by now I'm feeling a bit better
Although it's only temporary won't be long again till I'm fed up
I've been laying in bed for the past two months
Not working, no income, not going out to do much
Mental barriers keeping me locked in a prison it's too much
Though I don't even try to help myself cus I'm use less
 
Don't even bother with emails if it's gonna take 3 days to reply
You've made your mind up so let me get the fuck on with my life
I wish you harm, I really fucking do
Hardcore psychical abuse, I wish your custody gets noosed
And your left hanging with blood coming from your mouth like a dead moose
Throw your body in traffic just to see it get hammerd and bruised
Jump the mediun strip stick a knife in your throat to let loose
Same thing goes to little red u mutt
Where the fucks my $300 bux you fucking spent slut?
You and that cunt that I used to call a "mate"
Should go jump off a cliff and we can call it a "date"
Then just because I'm nice I'll come and piss on your graves
Then return a week later, and fucking do it again
 
Only one thing keeping me here, that's my mum
If she were to pass away I'd stick a fit in my arm
A hefty dose of smack, that I'd jack up then plunge
I'm not happy and I'm sick to death of this world
How the fuck do I break this cycle when it seems limited though?
I don't even control the way my mind thinks
I might think, then cement thoughts in my brain before I can even contemplate what I might think
Crazy, insane, spontaneous psycho
Faded, my brains dead and raging I might go
To page it these statements to grave all these fine notes
Hoping they stray from my brain ain't no getting away from this tight rope
 
I let them win sometimes so they keep playing
Jack Nicholson Shining crazy it's me jason
 
Waking up as the sun goes down
Body all in pain
Straight out the door to the worst part of town
Shooting up in vain

Slips all his money to the man
Here we go again....here we go again
Got bags of mercy in the palm of his hand
Shooting up in vain
 
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