⫸STICKY⫷ Post your Recordings - Lets hear em, Kid.mp3

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morninggloryseed said:
You can always send me wave files of the recordings, preferably in the same resolution they were recorded in, and I can make em as good as the recording allows me to. If the information is in the recording, then it is just a matter of bringing it out and reducing the noise and mud.
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Man, I'll try to get to it in the next few days. Fuck. Ok I will.
 
They're two rough recordings made by myself and a fellow psychedelicized soul on the road to enlightment whilst tuned into the universal song.
Click the images to travel to the archive.org pages.





Let me know what you think, preferably on the archive pages, but anywhere, really!
 
Support indie hip-hop?

So i'm trying to break out and really get a following. I'm working on my debut EP(Itunes and amazon this summer) in a studio in Seattle. And I'm trying to drop songs like the one below to build an interest(Just gotta get people to listen). So please give me a shot, I promise i won't disappoint. I have a rapid poetic flow, I use complex structures, I do it from the heart. If you gave me a chance, thank you - Midnight Misfit. Also willing to collaborate with innovative people.

 
A couple notes:

- You seem to have a pretty good feel for rhymes, however your verses were mostly riffs on a single end rhyme which made the lyrics kinda blend together.

- The beat was okay (the audio clip at the beginning was a nice touch), but it was the same throughout the song - it really needs some variety.

- Your flow started off fine, but like my other two comments mentioned, there isn't much that changes. Your vocal rhythm was based almost entirely around eighth notes throughout the song.

- My advice would be to add a chorus, a B Section, or some other musical idea to punctuate your verses because as it is, the song is kinda bland. Trying to get noticed in the Indie Hip Hop world is a bitch - everyone and their grandma can fire up Fruity Loops nowadays and call themselves a rapper. You gotta have something that sets you apart from the rest of the crowd or you're not gonna get anywhere.

- We have a 'Post Your Own Recordings' thread for stuff like this. The board itself is for discussion, self promotion belongs in that thread.
 
The sample is from "The Elephant Man" by David lynch- great film!
Thanks for the feedback man, and with this song we just wanted to do a simple free write, the beat we finished in the studio last night would be much more of what your talking about(intro, verse, chrous, bridge, outro, layered very well). Actually I really like your critique, maybe I can send it to you and you could give me some structured critisism? But yeah with this song I wanted to keep the beat really simple(Which i usually don't do) and just vent a freewrite.
Also my bad, i'll be sure to read the guidelines and stick to just that thread next time.
 
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