post-modern post-ironic haiku

[Raz]

Tell me what force beyond Science and Art leads me to these thoughts.
What color is my motivation today below the sun and the clouds?
How likely I am to end my day clutching a pillow.

=05.08.03=

 

[plazma]

I love haikus. This one I found to be quite interesting and definatley a good read.

Nice work!

(And just a tip by the way, odds are you'll get better responses if you just post one of your works at a time, because putting 3 in at a time kinda floods the market. Take it from me!)

-plaz out-

 

[Raz]

^^^

LOL..thanks for the advice Plaz...

They were just stuff I wrote in my exercise book over the course of a few days and when I finally got off my ass and posted one, I decided I might as well do the lot....

Thanks for da feedback also :D

--Raz--

 

[justsomeguy]

you certainley have a pretentious thread title!

:D