polya

[Cat Again]

a pervading sense of isolation and a cigarette
feel like the epitomy of sadness.

a longing for your eyes
your lips
your scent and touch
is all that exists at the moment.

why has destiny made you
the relic of my soul?
why has destiny then taken you
out of reach.

my days,
they're spent staring at the ceiling
connecting the dots
to form your face.
so that i feel further from you
than i already am.
...

(this is unedited and unfinished. as a matter of fact it was conceived after clicking the "new thread" button.)
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[E-girl]

i think its great.
sad, but great.
destiny is all fucked, IMHO.

 

[neverwas]

my days,
they're spent staring at the ceiling
connecting the dots
to form your face.
so that i feel further from you
than i already am.

i liked this section.

 

[Cat Again]

thank you for the replies. i want to work on this a little and then repost it.

 

[grey kat]

i love you soo much, its wonderful
Polya

 

[TiberCross]

i liked it alot. i'm feeling these things right now.

(this is unedited and unfinished. as a matter of fact it was conceived after clicking the "new thread" button.)

much of my stuff is done the same way and i usually don't change it.