Poetry Polaris

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Polaris


A gaze like disruptive lights
shining on my shallow ends,
the failed connections
and the loss of blue skies

Like soft fur engraved in asphalt,
with starlit eyes raining on streets

Polaris, my dear
since birth I grew cowering at your feet

 

[RareForm]

Love this. You continue to create such beautiful, vivid scenes.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Love this. You continue to create such beautiful, vivid scenes.

Thank you Mysterier, that makes me incredible happy to hear.
It was reading "Hamiform" yesterday that made me think about writing something. I've been so tired lately, I haven't had energy or motivation.
So thanks for that, too.

I figure you intended this first word to be shining.

Hosanna! That is absolutely correct. Merci!

 

[RareForm]

Well, then, the favor was returned, because I wrote Hamiform after considering your proliferating here.

 

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We should get a room, @Mysterier

 

[RareForm]

Yes. I'm randy.

 

[birdup]

I like it, particularly the way the first stanza transitions to the second. Nicely done. You have quite the talent. (That's all I had to say. Carry on with your flirtatious banter.)

 

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Thank you so much @birdup !