Poetry inspired by the relationship between drug users and teens

[Hunter S.]

Adult adolescents.
Overdeveloped kiddos.
Toddler fathers

All Sneak money off the shelf.
From their parents room
To say.
"Gunna go off myself",
"ya ya see yeah soon"

These seasoned tikes,
The little body big headed,
Maturity mistakes,
Hit the scene
Sneak out the back
And get obscene.

It's a picture no body sees.
A neuron horror show
Freddy Kruger keg stand
Hell of a time.

These skyscraper midget idiots
Wrestle brain cells with tickets
To see fools jump buildings
With lead boots on,
Splat.
Listen to the crickets.

The Walgreen hooligans
Bareknuckle box hallucinogens
While wavy faced parents
View the receipt trimmings-
And Prepare their behinds,
For a fine ass kicking.

After hours,
At the teenage dry cleaners.
Little fiends insert coins
To clean the smoke from their shirts,
With relationship detergent.
Parent proof!

The little kiddies
"get a job"
The store man said
"just take my money"

Next scene
-hours literally wasted.

 

[StrangeLight]

This is an excellent poem. Sometimes conventional concepts can be most accurately described abstractly, and this poem is a perfect example. You've not only presented visceral images, but you've revealed the feeling of the concept as opposed to the rational reality of the concept, which allows for a much greater level of relatability. Incredible work.

 

[Hunter S.]

I appreciate it very much!! Thank you