Poetry Criticism

[Meatpuppet]

i have posted quite a few things on here hoping to get some criticism on it... constructive..destructive..whatever... and all i've got is a pat on the back...not that i don't appreciate it or maybe even deserve it.. but i would like some people's insight...so instead of bumping all my shit...here's links to it all..
4 of my shorter peoms
Violin's Hiss
a few more of my works
obsessive compulsive contradiction
Outcast feeling at home
Deaf Prophet
Juggernaut
Lover or Whore
On Reading Walt Whitman
the lies people say
Wisdom through Pain
Sex Abuse
Vengance
My Girl
Through Chemical Abductions and Painted Faces
Rendez vous with truth
The Mistake of Trust
Sodium Tears
Stage Curtains of a Relationship
[ 14 August 2002: Message edited by: Meatpuppet ]

 

[spinkle]

Hey,
Email me at the address listed in my profile and I'll help you out with critiques.
edit: I updated my profile to make my address viewable. I didn't realize I had it hidden.
spinkle
[ 14 August 2002: Message edited by: spinkle ]