poem

[drea]

a simple beat
a blinding light
the rhythm ,the shine
all was night
a connection, adjoined
this silent dream
realized in this hot, sticky air
life comes back again
slithering into my vitality
electric blue and breathing
a saviour, a hero
gave me sight to see the truth
the one standing behind me,
playing with his hair
shuffling his feet
telling me he loves me....**

 

[HakunaMatata]

WOW!! This is soooooo sweet and so beautiful! I have a friend who feels and looks the most alive when she is drenched in the sweat of a thousand dancers, slipping and sliding to the grind of every one's sexy funk on a dance floor.
Your beautiful poem is so simple and yet so powerful (my favorite kind). It prints vivid images to the mind.
Much loves,
-Amina

 

[drea]

ohhh im so glad someone responded to that!! the poem is about when i met my boyfriend..i met him at the first party i ever went to in cleveland, and weve been together ever since. its like one of those strange love stories that youd never think would work out...but it did....it makes you beleive in things again.
mua

drea

 

[Shuddr2Think]

i have told you before, this is an awesome poem, and your use of words and rhyme are amazing....