~Poem of the week~9-23-04 ~onetwothreefour~

[cherub]

onetwothreefour is definately a writter with unique style of writting that is seem to be a fan of all in the forum. A winning choice out of some outstanding work that is has been flowing through this forum. A definate writter to keep a look out for more work.

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By onetwothree four
outrageous plagiarism, or: optimistic?


in the past passion wasn't strange,
and a poet was just one who

whiteloved life
white-----spaceand;
whitelived life
white-----spaceand;
whitedug life
white-----spaceand he;

swung with life from the rafters one
crazy acrobat in the circus, the world

cackling with glee or steaming with
furious outrage at the injustices
that sought to cage him in orchestral
anger at a world he only wanted to

white-----spacesee;

but he wrote and he wandered and he
wondered, and eventually he came to
this place - unhappy still -
but thinking and feeling, full of

white-----spacejoy;

...and his glory at its sight
was just what he'd been seeking.

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i've been reading lots of ginsberg and kerouac lately

 

[onetwothreefour]

wow, thank you

however, the copy and paste didn't work 'cause you need the source code ('cause of the way i formatted it)...

here 'tis (with spaces though, so it doesn't disappear again):

in the past passion wasn't strange,
and a poet was just one who

whiteloved life
white-----spaceand;
whitelived life
white-----spaceand;
whitedug life
white-----spaceand he;

swung with life from the rafters one
crazy acrobat in the circus, the world

cackling with glee or steaming with
furious outrage at the injustices
that sought to cage him in orchestral
anger at a world he only wanted to

white-----spacesee;

but he wrote and he wandered and he
wondered, and eventually he came to
this place - unhappy still -
but thinking and feeling, full of

white-----spacejoy;

...and his glory at its sight
was just what he'd been seeking.

 

[cherub]

thank you for doing that...... sorries

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Wonderfully unique and clever!

 

[RareForm]

Brilliant work, as always.

 

[katmeow]

Brilliant work, as always.

 

[.dR spgeddi]

 

[LostProphecy]

Kudos.