~Poem of the week~6-14-04~punktuality

[cherub]

Once again another suggested poem from katmeow . Awesome pick this week. Outstanding work with the clever words with raw opens truths that people seem to enjoy reading.

Congrats
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punktuality
Life tastes like chicken



You light the fuse but you don’t explode,
And you wonder why your all burned out,
You need release, but you wont let go,
Loosen your grip and lighten the load.

Life's too tough, it's too hard, too fast,
Thanks for the insight, but it's nothing new,
Everybody and everyone deal with it everyday,
Slow the hell down and realise we are all the same.

I don't need to read your mind to know,
That you have sometimes cried at night,
Guess what, I have been there too,
Don't lie and tell me there is anyone who has not.

Your thoughts are not unique or special,
But don’t let that deflate your false ego,
Let it humble you in realisation,
That you share the load with us all.

This rant is getting overly dramatic and serious
But that was not my aim in the least now was it
Relax and limber up, being tense will not help
I think I have a suitable point to it all

We are in this mess together,
Mixed up in a chaotic soup of life,
Take the time to taste it,
It tastes like chicken.

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

Um...
I'm not starting no flaming when I say this but compared to the previous weeks I found this "winner" to be a bit lacking. It's not that I didn't like it it's just that it didn't do anything for me.

 

[katmeow]

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You're free to nominate something

Anyways, I liked this one... I think it's a great reminder not to take life to seriously.

 

[~::Trip'nPuSSy::~]

ironic as a chicken. cheers, i can taste it.

 

[RareForm]

I liked the meaning of this poem.

 

[starchaser]

i really liked this,

For me, it just served as a reminder that we're (everyone) are more alike then i realise,

 

[punktuality]

thanks guys *honoured*