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Bluelighter
I know sometimes readers like the poems that they can relate to on some emotional level, I am like that also, but I like the flip side of things also. E-girl and I both thought this poem stood out. More for really of what it is and how it really makes you think of how words flow and the meaning behind it for the rider.
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At the end is a comment in RareForms post to this. It makes so much more greater sense
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CONGRATS for more outstanding work!
RareForm
Cryptosporidium Vernacular
Crippled crackhead conversation
with rusty needled words.
Toxic artery thoughts
for thalidomide integrity.
Curdled colonic suffusion
defacing oral precision.
engorge the viscous effluence
and digest the arid flux.
Acquiesce to routine nausea
and shoot dopamine excrete.
addicted to biological discharge
acting on mechanical impulse.
Viral, faecal, deficit dialogue,
verbal, replica, down's syndrome,
spastic colon, shock mentality,
that you emit through vacant speech.
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By: RareForm
thanks for the replies....for those who didn't really understand this.....this is somewhat far fetched, but i think it's quite effective in a way. I'm basicaly making a point about empty headed small talk that means nothing and takes no thought to talk about, and how people will adopt something to talk about even if it means nothing to them at all and they talk shit about it, that makes no sense. as far as the name goes 'Cryptosporidium' is a type of bacteria that causes diarrhea and 'Vernacular' is another word for dialect.
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At the end is a comment in RareForms post to this. It makes so much more greater sense
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CONGRATS for more outstanding work!
RareForm
Cryptosporidium Vernacular
Crippled crackhead conversation
with rusty needled words.
Toxic artery thoughts
for thalidomide integrity.
Curdled colonic suffusion
defacing oral precision.
engorge the viscous effluence
and digest the arid flux.
Acquiesce to routine nausea
and shoot dopamine excrete.
addicted to biological discharge
acting on mechanical impulse.
Viral, faecal, deficit dialogue,
verbal, replica, down's syndrome,
spastic colon, shock mentality,
that you emit through vacant speech.
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By: RareForm
thanks for the replies....for those who didn't really understand this.....this is somewhat far fetched, but i think it's quite effective in a way. I'm basicaly making a point about empty headed small talk that means nothing and takes no thought to talk about, and how people will adopt something to talk about even if it means nothing to them at all and they talk shit about it, that makes no sense. as far as the name goes 'Cryptosporidium' is a type of bacteria that causes diarrhea and 'Vernacular' is another word for dialect.
