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Bluelighter
This Weeks POTW is new to the forum, but has alot of heart to his writting. When People write about something we all have been through or can relate to it seems to spark something in everyone and this piece did just that. Great Stuff!
CONGRATS!
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Jay_Arel
"I cried"
I came home and cried today
The first time I've cried in quite awhile
You know how I am
I try my best to hide my tears
I cried because I saw you
The first time in almost a week
But I only saw the back of your head
A familiar sight from all the times you've walked away
I promised my friend i would come back
To talk to him about the show
I didn't expect you to be there
I walked up to the table
"What's up dude?"
"Hey, here he is"
I didn't look at you once
I couldn't -
Couldn't look at the girl that stole my heart
And then broke it
I'm sorry I didn't say hi
Again, I couldn't
Because I can't decide if I love you more than can be explained
Or if I hate you.
WHY?!!!!!
Why did you do all the shit you did?
For what reason?
Why did you have to lie?
Why didn't you give us a chance?
Why did you throw it all away?
WHY?!!!!!
I can't think
I can't speak
I can't even breathe without you
Nor do I want to
But I have no choice
You gave no other option
I've lost my best friend
I've lost the only girl I ever seriously
thought i could spend the rest of my life with
I've lost all hope
I've lost myself
All because you lost us
You gave me the 2 greatest gifts in my life
My guitar.......And moreso you -
I'll have the guitar until the day I die-
My reminder
But why did you take away the other?
The one that meant the most to me?
All i want to know is why you did all this...........
Guess I'll never know.
CONGRATS!
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Jay_Arel
"I cried"
I came home and cried today
The first time I've cried in quite awhile
You know how I am
I try my best to hide my tears
I cried because I saw you
The first time in almost a week
But I only saw the back of your head
A familiar sight from all the times you've walked away
I promised my friend i would come back
To talk to him about the show
I didn't expect you to be there
I walked up to the table
"What's up dude?"
"Hey, here he is"
I didn't look at you once
I couldn't -
Couldn't look at the girl that stole my heart
And then broke it
I'm sorry I didn't say hi
Again, I couldn't
Because I can't decide if I love you more than can be explained
Or if I hate you.
WHY?!!!!!
Why did you do all the shit you did?
For what reason?
Why did you have to lie?
Why didn't you give us a chance?
Why did you throw it all away?
WHY?!!!!!
I can't think
I can't speak
I can't even breathe without you
Nor do I want to
But I have no choice
You gave no other option
I've lost my best friend
I've lost the only girl I ever seriously
thought i could spend the rest of my life with
I've lost all hope
I've lost myself
All because you lost us
You gave me the 2 greatest gifts in my life
My guitar.......And moreso you -
I'll have the guitar until the day I die-
My reminder
But why did you take away the other?
The one that meant the most to me?
All i want to know is why you did all this...........
Guess I'll never know.
