~Poem Of The Week~ 1-19-04

[cherub]

I would like to express:

Poem of the week is to Celebrate Each of our writers here and there work.

I hope you find it in your hearts to make a response. Never know next week it maybe you. And I am sure everyone would like to know what people think about your writting.

If people choose not to post comments and celebrate the writer of the week. I honestly don't see a point in having this.

It is up to you all to make this work.
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This weeks post is by one of our long time bluelighters going on almost 4 years of being with bluelight. He has visited this forum in various spurts like alot of people do in this forum. Has always been a welcome visitor here.

SO here we Go!

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day_for_night
Posted: 1-13-04


~~if this is some kind of test, i dont know how much longer i can take~~

over
it was supposed to be over
i want it to be over
so desperately

and yet, in my morbid curiosity,
i linger and allow you to re-permeate me
you are like torturous honey
and i am the fly, i hope you know

sadness and melancholy
switch places intermittently
sparks, like flickers of joy in the dark,
remind me of fonder days
when i would not get stuck so easily

masochism...its no so bad
and yet, metaphorical whips of desire
are all too real

 

[RareForm]

This really is a good poem, I didn't see it earlier. Celebrated.

 

[Cat Again]

i also didnt notice this poem but now after having read it think its really good.

 

[ANDY R.]

Unless I’m misinterpreting your words, I can easily relate to what you’re saying. Great imagery and metaphors!

 

[cherub]

I would like to bump this up to the toppy top!

I have made my comments before
but reading it again,,,

still awesome

 

[.dR spgeddi]

i linger and allow you to re-permeate me
you are like torturous honey
and i am the fly,

that's so cute!