Poem (no title) + Lyrics (The Atari's - giving up on love)

[EvoldicA]

So you tell me you know how I feel..
and how life is all just a game... but its real
I wish I was strong like you.. I wish I was wrong too... but I'd rather love you..
without you.. I'm turning blue..
Gasping for air.. please.. come here...
yes.. Close to me.. is where you should be.. in my dreams.. of what reality should be.
Don't ever wake me, because where I am.. I'm happy..
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"giving up on love" - The Atari's
these past few weeks
I've been confused
sometimes I wonder if
I'm better off alone.
you fall in love
then break your heart.
you fall in love again
its never ending.
I used to have this friend
who took his fiance
to see billy idol
a couple weeks before
their wedding day.
the chick got backstage
and left my friend outside.
next day he called
from a hotel
asking for a ride.
I guess I'm giving up on love (x3)
'cause it really kind of sucks
uninspired
and growing tired
why am I always
so attracted to drama?
so here I am
grown up at 23
will someone tell me
what it takes to be happy?
I play in my band
and write a lot of songs
about relationships
and how mine went wrong.
maybe I'll meet that special
girl along the way
then she'll break my heart
and leave me crying.

 

[Mellabopper]

awww... hunnie

well i'm glad you posted some of your own work in this forum, i dont see much of it at all

great work though, seriously you should post more of it...
great song, too...
i dunno what yer goin through over there, but if you ever need to talk, you know where to find me

**HUGS**
Mellabopper

 

[zero9zero]

thank you for posting that.
kris is a friend of mine and a great, great song writer. i so way totally feel ya.
-d

 

[Spencer]

i like it. your words are pretty powerful. (and the atari's are a damn good band too.. thier older stuff anyway...)
-Spencer
There's room to believe
Out of sight
Out of mind
Out of reach

 

[PixieGirl]

Good stuff babe! Keep up your writing, it is good...I like the added touch of the song too.....you know I love ya and I am always here if ya need me to listen

Come out and play again soon!

 

[EvoldicA]

Thank you all for the comments.. zero9zero.. I hope to catch the atari's for the warped tour..