Poem: Is it Me?

[TinkNHondas]

Is It Me?
Is it dark
Or is it me
Did love leave
Or did I let it be
Perhaps I'm sad
Or insanely mad
Was your love
That made me so
Was tainted black
And left a hole
A hole that bore inside of me
And tore from me my eternal soul
Now I wonder here and there
Never getting anywhere
My heart is dead
My mind is dead
My soul is gone
And life is what remains
I ask again
Is it dark
Or is it me?
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"If you ever think of me out of the blue, it's just all the kisses I've blown to you, finally catching up." - Anon.

 

[5FACES]

****beautifully depressing!******
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...

 

[alykitty]

^
^
Agreed!!!

 

[zero9zero]

bumps up for tha dirty's true female junglist

memphis whut!

nice work, hun.

 

[TinkNHondas]

Thanx everyone..
side note to Dave: This is sad..I can't even get responses to my writings on our own hometown board!!

Oh well, it's good to know peeps like depressing poetry still!!!

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"If you ever think of me out of the blue, it's just all the kisses I've blown to you, finally catching up." - Anon.

 

[zero9zero]

^
i suppose it could be worse.
at least nigel didn't respond and hit on you.
*da dum tsss*
=oP
dave