poem i wrote after 1st roll

[AndyMC]

I wrote this poem the day after my first roll, everyone tells me its really good so I just thought I would share it with the rest of yous. P*L*U*R
Capricious
Melancholy. I am cold, dark, shallow, lifeless.
Love for nothing, feeling down, I lash out in pain.
Plans change and people change. Perhaps I will.
Anxiety. I admit I am a little scared.
Though, my soul has fired a tiny spark.
She says I will be fine. I want her help.
Change is coming soon, am I ready?
Dread. I feel fear building up inside.
But perhaps I should just welcome it.
I am shaking already, what is this?
I wet my mouth and take the pill.
Change is now.
I feel overwhelmed with the comfort.
A warm blanket of amiable pleasure.
I love everyone. I feel warm. Hug me.
Floating, soaring bliss. Live my life like this. I wish.
Rolling, flowing mist. Perhaps I can live like this.
Soothing, smoothing kiss. I love her.
Pleasantly calm, comfortably numb, warm love.
The music glides through my mind, my soul.
The feeling starts to fade, I try to hold on.
I don't want this to end, I need more.
Maybe it hasn't left, I feel feelings once again.
I want her, I love her, now I feel her. What now?
I have changed.
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AndyMC
AIM: AndyMC17

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[XxSweet LuvxX]

nice,i like it love.
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The sun warms my face,the grass ticlkles my feet,the wind messes my hair.....i love FEELING life

 

[day_for_night]

great poem, i'm going to move it over to the WORDS forum. you'll find it there