poem by me

[Cat Again]

yellow toothed grins
greet me as i walk
through a meloncholy
existence

crooked smiles
have called my name
in anguish i accepted
their welcome

with squinted eyes
i laughed so hard
ignorance
deserved my devotion

the deepest thought
where happiness lies
have become spectral

im a phantom.

 

[plazma]

A very poignant and arresting piece of poetry. The slightly off beat timing of the poem makes it quite interesting to read.



-plaz out-

 

[Frosty da snowman]

I very much like your style. It's seems kind of rapid paced to me, it holds u to the words rather well.

 

[Cat Again]

thank you for responding. i really appreciate it.

 

[LilkelPixy]

i am a fan of this as well. mainly for its rhythm