pleasure&pain

[mariacallas]

pointed and wasted
jointed and tainted
all nerves n neurons anointed
my swizzlestick synapses as
i exhale a milky white cloud
my soaring soul ecstatic and sighing
the dope is too much too enticing
prickprickprickling my frying pan brain
i furtively silently implore the paradise Gods
how such an exquisite pleasure
can know such sacrosanct pain

 

[RareForm]

good word usage!

 

[katmeow]

good word usage!

Oh yeah, thumbs up... this is cool!!

Short, but very neat work

 

[mariacallas]

oh wow i nearly forgot about this, one of my first posts in words evar. :D