"please, dear...allow me"

[human paraquat]

naked in humility,
imp imposing
your kiss struck
a soft anvil.
timid and dormant
as most kisses go,
i saw that you
were not quite yet
the craftsman.

 

[skjalff]

thats phat, very concise, but really strikes the chord. Great write man!!




skjalff

 

[cherub]

definately a clever little piece , great work !

 

[TiberCross]

i thought it was quite elegant, nice piece.

 

[Pomplemous]

human paraquat - can I just say that is possibly the nicest avatar I have seen.

I love that.