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[jameslovesyou]

carefully shaken and stirred
like chemistry set 6th grade summers
exploring her periodic table
i want to know the elemental combination
every facet of her 4 dimensional structure

i rupture rapture
revealing her urgent breathing need

see, this steed has never been broken

tokin' bowls to feel all the way down
to the strings or membranes
or whatever vibrating force makes everything everything
and all at once
we are swimming with
the Oneness
and that little sundress can't the truth from me

 

[hootie pie]

critique of words

I'm new and just wanted to thank you for your post... it made my day very beautiful words

 

[colicolo]

top stuff

 

[wesmdow]

....brings back memories