please check my song out....

[fifleman]

hey everyone.... i'm all fucked up, on alcohol and cocaine right now. been my drugs of choice for years now, and i've been writing music for fucking EIGHT years now. too shy to put it out there.

however, i finally got a homemade cheap dell mic recorded song onto my myspace. that's all i ever wanted myspace for was to advertise my wannabe music.......... check it out


the song is about cocaine, and how you love to hate it. at least, for me. opiate lovers, whatever lovers, love to love what you hate. click on the play button. and follow along on the lyrics. i wrote it myself, bad mouth me all you want, but i love it......... let me know.


haha. another line i may do. right now.....

http://www.myspace.com/feobot

here's the lyrics again....

Anxious by FEOBOT WRITTEN AND COMPLETED 1/6/09 in roughly 20 minutes. i'm the man

i don't know,
i see snow,
i feel old,
but i'm young so i'm told,

i get it,
fit into the world so perfect,
never have to finish what you started,
and you'll understand everything when you're dead,
mmmmm,mmmm

CHORUS

and i hate it,
i rip it to my face so jaded,
did you figure out i faked it,
and now i feel so fucking naked,



i know this,
i fucked bliss,
cancerous,
and oh so contagious,
mmmmm, mmmm

CHORUS X2

and i hate it,
i rip it to my face so jaded,
did you figure out i faked it,
and now i feel so fucking naked,

draw your line,
lose the time,
watch your eyes,
drown the white,
and you'll find that you just lost life,

i get it,
fit into the world so perfect,
never have to finish what you started,
and you'll understand everything when you're dead,
mmmmm,mmmm

 

[Mehm]

Its cool how you bust out screaming. I like the back and forth with yourself. The whole thing sounds like Cobain. kind of hard to understand what you're saying without the lyric sheet though..

awesome song, it shows you've been playing for a long time.

 

[fifleman]

hey thanks man, you are completely positive. cobain is my influence, but i definitely do not want to copy him. appreciate the words, because nobody has heard this shit. thanks again man...

 

[fifleman]

and yeah man, it's hard to understand my lyrics unless i get them down. a lot of the time i freestyle, as in just go with the flow and hope to rhyme. but, when i record like this, i have a tiny dell computer microphone that i hope gets my lyrics and melodies (though I can't sing the best) and i play guitar over it. i love this track though. anyways, thanks for the kind words again

 

[swilow]

The melody is very Nirvana-like. It would sound better if recorded more neatly, but the distortion sounds cool Uncertain aout the lyrics though; it has an emo-ish feel to it, but thats purely my own perspective.

If younrecord it properly, I reckon you should use distortion on the sreaming part as well; it could become semi-industrial-ish.

Nice one

 

[fifleman]

thanks man. yeah i would like to record it somewhat professionally at least in a clean environment with a solid mic, not my dell included one ha.

i admit it may sound a bit emo. i was coming off a 45 gram in one month cocaine binge and my head was a mess. i was trying to capture the essence of my very own existence being pissed away on a useless substance that gets me through minutes at a time.

cocaine is cancerous to me, for i'm not one to handle it. also, the line i fucked bliss means that i made bliss impure, made my own ability to find happiness hard and relentlessly tiring after depleting life's value through cocaine.

thanks again man

 

[swilow]

^If you need any advice on mixing/recording/etc., feel free to PM me; I is a qualfied yet not working sound engineer.

By the way- your song was stuck in my head. That is a good thing