Playful Paradise

[realm]

6-12-06

Open minded
But i'm closed for Sunday
Break me off a piece of happiness
I need more than a sample
Time is tinged and poorly planned
My personality changes like the wind
Tell me where to go from here
I seem to be lost in your head
I let myself in through the back door
Home is where the heart is
I gambled my heart on darts
Fuck it I still have a liver



I thought this was the most playful poem i've ever written. I just thought maybe some people could relate to this

 

[wastedwalrus]

I completely relate to the line about your personality changing "like the wind". That's how I am and how I've always felt. Cool poem!

 

[colicolo]

Open minded
But i'm closed for Sunday

reminds me of fighting with my ex when hung over.

cool poem, made me smile.